●四级作文模板 (i)说明原因型模块 currently, xx has been the order of the day. this does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than xx it is clear that (1). if you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. on the contrary, if you (3).failure will be following with you. it turns out that all your plan falls through. no one can deny another fact that (4).you don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).it will exert a profound influence upon (6).with reference to my standpoint, i think (7).注释:1:xx的第一个优点2:支持xx的做法3:不支持xx的做法4:xx的第二个优点5:举例证明优点二6:说明xx优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文: the importance of self-confidence currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. this does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence. it is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities). if you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true. on the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). failure will be following with you。it turns out that all your plan falls through. no one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).you don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of mme. curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). it will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one's ambitions). with reference to my standpoint, i think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will). (i)说明原因型模块(2) in recent years, xx has caused a heated debate on (1). the factors for (2).first of all, (3).then, there comes a case that (4). moreover, (5). especially when (6).indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).in this way, we should behave just like (8). the impact of television in recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in china have satellite tv, offering as many as 50 channels. it has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children. the factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).first of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). moreover, (the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies). especially when (the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's tv viewing).in this way, children will not be influenced too deeply. (i)说明原因型模块(4)for most of us today, (1). from above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.the primary reason, i think, is (3).second,(4). the third reason, actually, is (5).the significance for (6)。therefore, (7).注释:(1)人们针对xx的态度和举措(2)归纳现状(3)第一个原因(4)第二个原因(5)第三个原因(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因 pollution most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem. lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)from above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows. the primary reason, i think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). the significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken. therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us). (i)说明原因型模块(5)these days we often hear that (1).it is common that (2). why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? for one thing, (3).for another, (4). what is more, since (5),it is natural that (6 ).to solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. we should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and i do believe everything will be better in the future.(1)提出论题(2)说明现状(3)理由一(4)理由二(5)理由三(6)理由三引起的后果(7)解决方法 pollution of environment these days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).it is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).  why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? for one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).for another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). what is more, since (the industrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. the smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).  to solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. we should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and i do believe everything will be better in the future. 写作模板——图表式作文 it is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of y has undergone dramatic changes. it has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as x varies). at the point of x1, y reaches its peak value of …(多少). what is the reason for this change? mainly there are … (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. first of all, …(第一个原因). more importantly, …(第二个原因). most important of all, …(第三个原因). from the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. the trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势). 写作模板——提纲式作文1. 对立观点式 a. 有人认为x 是好事,赞成x, 为什么?b. 有人认为x 是坏事, 反对x,为什么?c. 我的看法。 some people are in favor of the idea of doing x. they point out the fact that 支持x 的第一个原因。they also argue that 支持x 的另一个原因。however, other people stand on a different ground. they consider it harmful to do x. they firmly point out that 反对x 的第一个理由。 an example can give the details of this argument: there is some truth in both arguments. but i think the advantages of x overweigh the disadvantages. in addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, x also may x 的有一个坏处。 2. 批驳观点式 a.一个错误观点。 b. 我不同意。 many people argue that 错误观点。by saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。an example they have presented is that 一个例子。(according to a survey performed by x on a group of y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。 there might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. but if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。there are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。 3. 社会问题(现象)式 a.一个社会问题或者现象b. 产生的原因 c.对社会和我们生活的影响 d. 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)e. 前景的预测。 nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (x has increasingly become a common concern of the public). according to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。 there are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 x has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 a dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent x from bringing us more harm. 同上based on the above discussions, i can easily forecast that more and more people will …….. 辩论式议论文模版1 some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1. but other people take an opposite side. they firmly believe that 观点2. as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea. there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. first of all, 论据1. more importantly, 论据2. most important of all, 论据3. in summary, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或:from above, we can predict that 预测. 模版2 people hold different views about x. some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. for one thing, 论据1.for another, 论据2. last but not the least, 论据3. to conclude, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测. 模版3 there is no consensus of opinions among people about x(争论的焦点)。some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. the reasons are obvious. first of all, 论据1。 furthermore, 论据2。among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. that is, 论据3。 a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。 as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.


●这里有胡敏老师的解读雅思写作评分新标准---建议去看看, http://edu.sina.com.cn/en/2005-04-22/185832909.html 还有专家李鑫老师等解析雅思评分标准和备考---建议去看看, http://edu.sina.com.cn/exam/2005-08-10/18005811.html 雅思考试写作部分概述与评分标准: 雅思考试全程考试时间为2小时55分钟。其中,写作在听力、阅读部分之后出现,是笔试的最后一项。雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文(Task 1 and Task 2)。写作中,以移民为主的培训类(General Training)和以留学为主的学术类(Academic)试题类型有所不同。 Task 1要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的文章。G类(培训类)要求考生针对题目要求写一封信来询问某方面信息或阐释某种状况。到目前为止,出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。而A类(学术类)则考核图表为主。考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格等。也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。另外,流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。 Task 2 要求考生在40分钟内写作一篇不少于250字的议论文。A类和G类在Task 2方面非常相似。考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见,或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点,或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。 雅思评分按9分制。基本上,移民或读语言学校起码要5分(Modest User)。留学需要6分(Competent User)以上。如果读的是法律、传媒、管理等名校的研究生的话,写作最好达到7分(Good User)。但考生最后写作成绩并不是Task 1和Task 2的简单平均,而是以Task 2为主。 雅思写作的评分标准不象四六级或托福采用整体式的评分,而是分项式评分(analytical scoring)。也就是说,考官给考生并不只打一个分数,而是根据具体的评分细则分项给分。 书信或图表评分标准: Task 1(书信或图表)按照以下三方面评分:Task Fulfilment(完成任务);Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接);Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)。 Task Fulfilment指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。具体说来,书信作文应该完成书信的使命,题目里的每一项要求都不可或缺。图表作文应该在对于图表所给出的数据进行分析的基础上指出图表的总体趋势和走向,并点明与总趋势不相吻合的特殊之处,而且还要有数据的支持。 Coherence and Cohesion指的是文章通过一定的衔接手段(Cohesive Devices)来表明上下文的连贯性(Coherence)。衔接手段,或叫语篇纽带,经常用的有(logical)逻辑、(grammatical)语法和(semantic)语义三方面的连接词(connectors)。 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure指的是文章的语言表达。5分或5分以下的作文一般语法错误较多。6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误,用词和句子基本准确。而7分以上的作文用词丰富(Variety)、句子结构复杂(Complexity)。 议论文评分标准: Task 2(议论文)的三方面评分标准是:Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据);Communicative Quality(交流质量);Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)。 Arguments, Ideas and evidence涉及对于议论文的内容要求。具体说来,应该是内容切题,论据合理,论证充分。 对于Ideas(内容)而言,应该注意的是不要出现跑题。有的考生由于词汇量有限,导致题目中的单词不认识,从而写作的时候写离题了。比如:Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Do you agree or disagree? 如果考生不懂international tourism是什么意思的话,这道题是没法写的。但是,雅思写作涉及的词汇量并不是大得令人生畏,大概有六七千左右。考生万一碰到个把单词不理解的话,完全可以通过上下文加以推测。比如上面这句话中tension可能是个生词,但是如果考生能想到rather than表示对比关系的话,可以推断tension应该和understanding(理解)形成反义词,那就应该是接近于误解,即紧张关系的意思。所以,对于单词,考生应该平时注意积累,应试时根据上下文推断。 有的考生可能题目里面每个单词都认识依然写跑题,那可能是因为对于所涉及的题材不了解,没话可说。比如:When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 如果考生毫不了解所谓的传统技能和生活方式的话,肯定对此束手无策。雅思议论文涉及contemporary social issues of common interest(人们普遍感兴趣的当代社会问题),考生应该平时注意这方面的知识积累和主动思考。 另外,还有的考生不但认识题目中的每个单词,而且也熟悉话题,但依然写跑题,那很有可能是因为没有抓住写作重点。事实上,绝大多数考生写跑题都是因为这个因素。比如:There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon, and offer some recommendations. 许多考生都会注意到这道题考的是青少年犯罪话题,而且应该分析原因并提出解决办法。但是,如果原因只写了一段而建议写了数段的话,那么就是犯了忽略重点的错误。因为,如果没有把原因进行详细分析而贸然提出建议的话,这种建议是缺乏依据的。正确的做法应该是原因写二至三段,结果写一段。其次,考生还应注意到这道题考的不是泛泛的青少年犯罪的原因与解决方法,而是为什么现在青少年犯罪人数越来越多的原因和建议。由此看来,考生应该仔细审题,防止产生理解上的偏差。 对于Evidence(论据)来说,关键要合理,并且能够证明论点。比如Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and trying to protect these animals is a waste of resources. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学这样写道:We can hardly imagine what our life will be like without wild animals. For example, if there is no cat, there will be more mice. The increase in the number of mice will result in the reduction of food resources and the spread of diseases. Thus, it is very important to protect animals. 这里,猫的论据是不合适的,因为猫不属于wild animals(野生动物)。再比如,The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学在论证这道题的时候举了赵括“纸上谈兵”的例子,说赵括就是典型的有很多兵法等理论知识,但是由于缺乏带兵打仗的实际经验,导致秦赵长平之战中赵兵大败,自己也命丧沙场,这充分说明了只有理论知识没有实际经验的恶果,所以应该重视实际经验。但这个论据也是不得体的,因为题目涉及的是大学应该怎么做,而赵括明显没有上过大学。事实上,古代的例子通常不适宜在雅思作文中出现,即便出现了,许多情况下只是作为反面例子与现今状况形成对比。 好的Arguments(论证)应该是充分并且有力的。这就需要运用多种论证手法。常用的论证手法有:explanation(解释说明),emphasis(强调论证),exemplification(举例说明),cause and effect(因果论证),comparison and contrast(比较与对比)facts and statistics(事实和统计数据),concession and refutation(让步与反驳),classification(分类),definition(下定义),analogy(比喻)等。论证手法的运用还应该和关联词结合起来。 Communicative Quality(交流质量)大体上与Task 1的Coherence and Cohesion相同,也涉及文章中代词,关联词,同义反义词等的运用。常用的关联词有:对比however, although, but, nevertheless;结果as a result, as a consequence, therefore, because of this, otherwise;附加in addition, additionally, and, as well as, furthermore, also, moreover;举例for example, for instance, such as, including;强调in fact, indeed;时间after, following, before, until, during, between, while等。 议论文在Vocabulary and Sentence Structure方面与Task 1的要求相同。 希望这些资料对你有些帮助!
●模板可以套用就是分数很低 最多得5分 这已经算是仁慈的了你最好自己写


●套模板能得5分 这是最高分了 因为没有创新? 考官对这些模板都很熟悉的 我当时就是逃了吗版 写作只得了5分 其他部分都很好 惨痛的经历 我还用了很多经典的句型了 所以在你实在没有办法的情况下使用模板 能写尽量不要套


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●用模板不好... 会把自己框起来的... 思路的话其实很简单 就是先描述给出的图形 然后再开始分述 在然后总结,也是可要可不要的... 如果真得要看看思路的,我建议你还是去上课... 我觉得上课更有效果... 就是那种专门补写作的班。
●雅思大作文一般都会给出几个你可以选择的题目来做,其中一定包括当年比较重大的事件,比如今年的北京奥运。你只要做到了以下几点,分数基本上都在优良范围里!  1) 结构清晰,不累赘,思路不杂揉,outline能联系到课上所讲的经典大主题思路  2) 题型审题正确,按照要